This was the poster we submitted for the second interim, people seemed to like it generally, but there were mixed feelings about the main heading and taglines, and how those contributed to the rhetoric. Some also said that the satirical names on the trash distracted from the main text, where as others loved these being in the composition and the fun of them, and found it pulled them in to the poster more.
At this point our flyer, which is intended to be a napkin, is still just in the hand drawn mock-up phase. We were told that having less text on the front would keep it tidy and just as effective, especially if we assume they will be looking at the back where we will have random facts, event info and the website link.
All in all a very useful and informative interim which gave us alot of things to consider. :)


Love the colours and the satirical use of well known kiwi brands, I don't think they distract from text at all, if anything they made me laugh and look closer ☺ Awesome work Dee!
ReplyDeleteLove the colours and the satirical use of well known kiwi brands, I don't think they distract from text at all, if anything they made me laugh and look closer ☺ Awesome work Dee!
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